It takes many passes of editing and proofreading before any writing achieves professional polish: nothing turns out perfect on the first try. These side projects are in various stages of completion. Have a look at them: watch how the plot and writing changes over time. See how many errors you can pick out and share them in the comments, or just enjoy the stories. Whichever you prefer.
Friday, January 25, 2019
Concerning Bycatch Ch. 11
Mario stumbled up the hall, charging back along the passages he had just traveled.
He had taken the lead now, navigating by memory to the place where their little group had split up. Henry floated along beside him, looking confused and reasonably concerned.
"I don't understand, where are we going?" he asked.
"To the front door," said Mario, a bit breathlessly.
"But that's where the boos went!"
"I know-" said Mario, but the conversation was cut short as he miss-stepped, hissing as he caught himself.
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